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Be the sun in my sky,

Where song birds cry

Tears of joy down from heaven.

 

Be the wind through the trees,

That warm summer breeze

That dries the tears in my eyes.

 

Be the wings on my back,

A beacon of light

Shining hope into forever.

 

Be the beat of my heart,

Light when all is dark

Throwing shadows far from me.

 

Be the air in my lungs,

Help me to breathe,

I forget when you’re not with me.

 

Wrap your arms around me,

We will weather this storm.

Let the ocean crash around us.

 

Even though all we have is now,

Love can last forever.

We can’t back down now.

 

Be the sun in my sky,

Tell me you love me tonight

And I will hold on to you forever.

this is a poem about love :)
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PatternVSUser Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure when I'll be in love it'll feel something like this.
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indigoXD9 Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
thanks :)
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tommyboywood Jul 1, 2013  Professional Writer
sweet
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indigoXD9 Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
thanks :)
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imaginative-lioness Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
'Be the sun in my sky,
Tell me you love me tonight
And I will hold on to you forever.'


This ending is amazing, in fact this entire piece is amazing. There are so many beautiful images in this piece, you have such a wonderful writing style. I love the repetition in this piece, it creates so much impact and power. Wonderful! :heart:
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indigoXD9 Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
thanks so much :)
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:iconwolfangdarkwood:
I really enjoyed this one :)
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indigoXD9 Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :D
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:icongitone:
Have you ever read, 'You Are My Sky' by Ivor Gurney? I bet you'ld like it.
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indigoXD9 Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I will check it out :) thanks for the comment
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